In this video, I reviewed and scored a student essay sent to me in my Telegram group, IELTS9PRO, (link below). As you will see, I went through it and made comments and corrections then scored it according to the official writing criteria.
So, if you want to see just what the examiners do when they score your essay, watch the video, and you can join my group and submit your IELTS writing there and ask me Qs, etc.
The essay is for the following topic, In the last decade, there has been an increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, however, others see these courses as less effective than classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?
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