Student IELTS Two Part Question Essay Review with Band 9.0 Example.

This is an essay from another student in my Telegram group, IELTS9PRO; this time with a two-part essay question and as usual, a Band 9.0 example for you to study. For the following topic, In many education systems, more academic subjects are being introduced instead of sport and exercise. How will it impact the children? What can be done about it? And don’t forget, if you want to have your essay assessed, join me on Telegram.. https://t.me/ielts9progroup