If you saw yesterday’s video, you will have seen how I analysed the student’s essay and commented on the main problem, that of Lexical Resource. In this video, I analyse the second essay he sent me after seeing my video on his first essay. I wasn’t very pleased to see that there was no difference in his writing style, none whatsoever. As a result, my comments were perhaps a little harsher than in the previous video. However, watch and learn and try to avoid his mistake: inaccurate and inappropriate use of vocabulary.