IELTS Task 2 Writing: Band 5.0 and Band 9.0 Essay Comparison.

In this video, I take another subscriber essay (which I scored at 5.0) and compare it with an essay of my own (band 9.0). You can see what the differences are as I compare them with the official criteria to illustrate my points. For the following topic, Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. If you like this and want to submit your own writings for assessment (when I have time of course), you can join my Facebook group below… https://www.facebook.com/groups/englishwritenow/