IELTS Task 2 Opinion essay: Full Correction and Scoring!..

This video is another of the winners of IELTS9PRO subscribers essay review draw. Every week, we post a topic, the members write an intro and we pick one winner to write and submit a full essay for correction and scoring For this week, the topic is below Some people believe that the restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? See how I score it and send your intro to http://www.ielts9.pro to be a winner yourself!….