Full Essay Commentary: Problem/Solution Essay with scoring..

Another day, another video. This time an IELTS Task 2 Problem/solution essay. Have a look and see how the author tackles the question and see why I only score this essay as 6.5. By the way, if you want to see your essay here, you can subscribe to my video service on http://www.ielts9.pro and submit it there, or message me at my Facebook page “Then English Native”…