As you will have seen with my earlier posts, I often correct letters for my Telegram members. However, that assessment is only perfunctory, focusing on the most obvious errors; for my full criteria led review you need to subscribe to my premium service.
Let me show you a sample letter of this below.
Note the comments and changes to the text, now see below for scoring according to the criteria.
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