Full IELTS essay review and scoring…

As well as reviewing essay intros for my sister site IELTS9PRO, I also take an essay a week chosen at random from a lucky subscriber and do a full review and scoring. This is the latest one in the series, about whether we should spend money on reparing old buildings or build new ones.

As you see it is an opinion essay and has several problems: it is too vague and doesn’t define it’s key terms, and is repetitive in the vocabulary used. You will see what I mean when you watch the video.