Band 9.0 Sample Essay (as requested by a student)

Discuss both views Student request video

As you may or may not know, in my FB group I assess student essays, comment on writing tasks, and answer general queries. One of my goals for the coming months is to be more regular regarding content creation, and I will post more about that shortly as I have some new things planned. So, I asked the members of the group what they wanted to see in a video, and one guy asked me to write a sample essay and make a video of the writing process, explaining how and why I wrote each sentence. And the video below is exactly that…

And if you want to join my group and get access to corrections and maybe make a request, the link is