Welcome, to another video. For today, I have taken a student essay and assessed it and written a sample answer. The topic is taken from the new book Cambridge 13 and is the first of four I shall be analysing this week. I am asking students to write on the new topics and assessing them and making this into videos for you to learn from..
So, watch the video, and if you like you can join my FB group IELTS9pro and send your writings and comments there…
